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Enjoyed it for a sketch book animation! Let's see where you go from here. Followed!

Loved all the squash and stretch on the birds. Pretty funny toon...for A jag cunt.

I overall enjoyed it :o I just had a few comments!

Why did the fight start? The ending implied that she was gonna take a candy bar that the main character wanted but in the beginning the woman was just ahead in line? Didn't make sense to me.

I loved most of the fighting and that first punch had a LOT of weight behind it! Love it! However I felt that the the use if the clenched fist was a little over used.

Finally as others have said just work on the art style and sound. You can simplify for speedy action scenes but sometime it seems a little too simple.

but good job none the less!! Really enjoyed it!

SuperLME responds:

Thank you, xDeadBoii.
When planning out this animation, I had the fight scene as the main course. I needed a way for the fight to be set up and that's why the girl stepped in front of her. I wanted a pseudo realistic / comic art style with some shading into it. This is the first animation I've done using after effects.

-Lax

One of my favorite things in this whole community is collabs and this was an amazing effort by everyone involved! this was way better than the Dragon Ball Z collab. Great work everyone!!

Very cute! Very nice for a 24 hour animation contest!

I enjoyed the style and colors of the characters but I just didn't think it was funny. Still good though!

Well, That was super funny! Great job!! I really like the use of SFX!

I KNOW i liked what I saw, I just didn't understand :o

Making something so weird it doesn't make sense but seems to make all the world of sense within it's world is an amazing thing. I would LOVE to see more!!

First and ONLY born here.

I am an only child not by choice but by illness (my mother fell ill, she wanted more children but she thought it wasent wise do to illness) I was also a very rebellious child and my parents knew this. I do feel like a lot is expected of my as a 1st(and only) child but only in the family department. My parents seem to only care about if I help give birth to males to keep the family name going since my family is very small. (only 5 members) So to a small degree the 1st child applies to me.

I enjoyed your cartoon in a sense it was different and educational. Keep up the good work!

EAEverything responds:

Thanks a lot.

I agree. My brother was the first one and crazy expectation were put on him with a very strict upbringing. He kinda managed to take the heat and he is really carrying on the family now that we are all scattered.

I was number 3, so actually I get along really well with him because we are so different but complement each other I'd say.

What you are given to start with is just the beginning of the story and then there is what you do with it.

A guy who said "why the f*ck not?" In regards to making cartoons after he himself wasted his life watching WAY TOO MANY cartoons. Let's see how this goes...

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